05 July 2008

trial project 2... revised at home























so here is my 3 hour attempt to rescue that last poster...
the colours are again messed up... the blue is supposed to be red....

what do you think?
should i work on the rest and e-mail omar the revised versions?

i think i will....

i am 1% satisfied with the work i did while on trial....

AHHHHHHHHH!!!

i am looking at this stuff now and it is so CRAPPY!!

i think perhaps i am having some sort of a breakdown...
oh no....

4 comments:

re: sabina said...

k-bot,
is NOT crappy. i do love the blue much much more.
i wonder if the invisible word should be called out. or "not" and "invisible" and the logo.
just thinking--this one is way more legible, and the blue echos water, the hose-pipe in the corner.
you simply must send it along.

beep beep. we're in a hurry! off to italy.

re: sabina said...

now i read about the RED.
child & top info in red,

tagline in blue?
logo in white and water shape in a blue transparency?

your shapes are fantastic! fan-tas-tique! and i'm rather fond of muted, super simple in general.
color is something i'm learning from the latin community--they simply insist on it. color can be your hook for your sweet sweet shapes.
xo

Anonymous said...

It is not crappy, but rather it looks like a comical jab at burning kids.

I mean it looks like more of a low brow joke than an actual poster about the dangers of fire.

Crispy, burnt kids...mmmmmmm Im loving it

Unknown said...

I think its brilliant...I am also a firm believer in my own brilliance.

As an anthropologist I know that the most severe burns are suffered by children of the third world. That's a good thing, since the impoverishment of the third world makes our lives in the north better. I mean maybe those lazy colored folk could learn to make use of the charred remains of their children...it's called entrepreneurship you bums

I loved it....thanks a bunch