trial project 1.... comic about toronto

i was asked to make a comic strip about my home town as a part of the trial at fabrica.
if its good enough, an italian weekly magazine called 'internazionale' might publish it....


i think it mine is 85% sucko...
the yellow colour came out all weird in the printer and...
i don't know... it just kinda sucks....

please give me an HONEST review...

i think it sucks.